Hi Lile, I'm Deakyn from Awahono School. I really like your positive blog comments post. You explained to the reader how to make a positive comment. You also said what is the correct thing to put and what is the wrong thing to add to a comment. Is the blue box with writing in it a comment? If it is a comment why don't you put at the top a heading saying "Example Comment". Maybe next time you could make the wrong thing to do writing a little bigger, and also the example comment. I hope I can visit your blog again, and you can maybe visit mine too. Kind Regards Deakyn
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Hi Lile, I'm Deakyn from Awahono School. I really like your positive blog comments post. You explained to the reader how to make a positive comment. You also said what is the correct thing to put and what is the wrong thing to add to a comment. Is the blue box with writing in it a comment? If it is a comment why don't you put at the top a heading saying "Example Comment". Maybe next time you could make the wrong thing to do writing a little bigger, and also the example comment. I hope I can visit your blog again, and you can maybe visit mine too.
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Deakyn