Hi this is my newest post that I made this afternoon with help from my beautiful teacher miss spice.
The hard part was the copying and pasting.
But the easy part was the writing.
comment down below what I need to fix.
Thursday 1 March 2018
1 comment:
Please structure your comments as follows:
Positive - Something done well
Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say
Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
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Hi Lile, I'm Deakyn from Awahono School. I really like your positive blog comments post. You explained to the reader how to make a positive comment. You also said what is the correct thing to put and what is the wrong thing to add to a comment. Is the blue box with writing in it a comment? If it is a comment why don't you put at the top a heading saying "Example Comment". Maybe next time you could make the wrong thing to do writing a little bigger, and also the example comment. I hope I can visit your blog again, and you can maybe visit mine too.
ReplyDeleteKind Regards
Deakyn